From the review I was given the feedback to ensure that I retain a continuity and style throughout the designs- to show that there has been a constant thought process through each presentation board. This is something that I have aimed to do through the constant use of blue colours, book paper and graph paper.
My use of red to emphasis the designs was criticised as being suggestive of blood, however the intention was purely to enhance the subject of the sketches.
In reflection, I have learnt that the subject of sketches should be signified by giving the drawings more details and fading the background.
In order to move the project forward, I plan on making prototypical moulds of my designs, using air drying clay which I will follow to paint and present.